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Painseeker Reader Renee's Commentary
Wow....was she referring to you, Lance? You couldn't be great if she wasn't "normal"--the normal you needed. I think Raychel was most normal with Kyle, and you couldn't handle it.

Lance Wagner's Commentary
Why on earth would I add this particular poem to the site if I thought it was damning me?  No, she is clearly referring to Kyle McAllister.  To confirm my assertion, please review Kyle McAllister's articles "The Purge" and "Hunter."  Although his articles are obviously biased beyond belief, I think Raychel's poem strikes the proper note of balance.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

 
     
 

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