Lance
Wagner's Commentary
This is Fighting For
Twilight as it was first and best done. Raychel later re-wrote
this poem with Kyle McAllister to change it into a song. I
should re-phrase that to say she disemboweled the poem and it turned
into a song. It is frenetic, visceral, and desperate. When
I post the song, you'll understand.
Ken
Kincaid's Commentary
This is not Fighting For Twilight. This is Fighting For
Twilight's great, great grandfather. There's no rhyme scheme or
happy ending. It's not even the same story. I know that
Lance Wagner likes to pretend that Raychel's depressing poetry
reflects the "real" Raychel, but I would expect nothing less
from him. Some people don't suffer 24x7. I wonder if he
considers those people "real."
